Sunday, January 27, 2013

Literacy Within An Adapting Society


Literacy Within An Adapting Society
            Do you really believe that we are becoming illerate? Or are we just developing different methods and styles to maintain the status of literacy we’ve acquired while allowing it to adapt to modern society? Throughout the readings I’ve come to the conclusion that literacy cannot be easily defined. It holds a different value to every individual. How many hours a week do you spend sifting through your Facebook newsfeed, reading over multiple comments left on a picture of your ex? You may not be consuming the words of an award-winning novel but you’re still reading. We live in an age that feeds off of negativity. Our brains, with a little help from the media, have been wired to believe that bad news is good news.  The tiniest hint that technology is destroying the minds of society would surely have a snowball effect. I’d be willing to bet that you became so enthralled with such a story that you missed the obvious; humans have been adapting their standards and methods of literacy since the very beginning. Why would such a detrimental human instinct change now? New technologies have benefited society in such a way that allows us to be adaptable in both reading and writing settings. As the “longitudinal study of writing at Standford” showed, we are fully capable of transitioning from informal to formal (Lunsford).  Let our generation check Facebook and Blog; we may be more literate than you suspect and I’m going to prove it to you.
            I’ve watched you hunched over the computer, devouring Hedge’s words from his ridiculous article. It’s a little ironic that you’re falling into his stereotype of an illiterate American by reading his words online. Simply because you are not holding a tangible, print-based book in your hands you would fall into Hedge’s category of “the other America, which constitutes the majority, exists in a non-reality-based belief system. This America, dependent on skillfully manipulated images for information, has severed itself from the literate, print-based culture” (Hedges). Hedge’s entitlement has completely blinded his faith for America. Since our generation is surrounded by technology I suppose he would categorize our class as illiterate. Now, I don’t know about you, but I see a group of talented writers who just so happen to blog. He sees the majority of us as mindless robots that “cannot differentiate between lies and truth” and are “thrown into confusion by ambiguity, nuance and self-reflection” (Hedges). If you’re going to sit there and agree with this type of argument, you may as well delete your twitter account and start purchasing the entire works of Ernest Hemmingway, whose writing “style is simple, direct and somewhat plain” and was often riddled with grammatical errors (Cooper). Hedge’s connections with literacy and political campaigns are rather insulting to the entirety of America. You would think because of how well read and scholarly he is that he’d understand that humans have not necessarily changed, we’ve only adapted to our environment. He would also know that those who do fall under the widely accepted definition of illiterate often couldn’t help it.  Shribner asks, “Does the prevailing distribution of literacy conform to standards of social justice and human progress?” (Shribner). I would argue yes. Condemning individuals as illiterate is in fact oppressive. Schools within America are incredibly disproportioned due to tax dollars and the social status of certain areas. The small percentages of American’s that are actually illiterate are often unable to fix their situation because they do not have the means or legality to do so. If you’re going to side with Hedge’s and toss around such an oppressive word as a blanket term to describe people who interact with social media than I suggest you do some research on how different your life may have been if you were born in East St. Louis, New York.
Hedge’s need to mark this technological age as something new and frightening just goes to show how stubborn he truly is. He states, “Political leaders in our post-literate society no longer need to be competent, sincere or honest. They only need to appear to have these qualities” (Hedges). I’m sorry, I was under the impression that politician’s have always been like this. American’s wouldn’t have had so many mudslingers back in the 1800s if our politicians had been so saint-like. Granted, there will be groups of people who are gullible and easily influenced by these individuals of power but this is nothing new. Do you honestly believe that we all became sheep because of the iPad release? The possibility that we are changing the way we read and analyze a text is far more likely and agreeable than Hedge’s extremity of illiteracy.
Nicholas Carr writes about his personal experience from technology. He reflects, “My concentration often starts to drift after two or three pages. I get fidgety, lose the thread, begin looking for something else to do” (Carr). Carr’s own narrative proves my point that our brains are constantly adapting to our environment. Can’t you see that we’re not becoming wordless savages? We haven’t lost the ability to comprehend a text we’re just changing how we access it. Technology is not some inherent evil; it’s a useful tool that has allowed us to preform tasks as ease. Just as the cavemen discovered fire, technology has allowed for “Research that once required days in the stacks or periodical rooms of libraries can now be done in minutes. A few Google searches, some quick clicks on hyperlinks” and you’re done (Carr). Think about our class; we use technology for it almost every day through the forms of blogging, looking up news stories, and reading articles. I doubt all of that time online is causing our brain to dumb itself down. Sure, we might open up a tab to check what the score for the game is…but why shouldn’t we? If the option to do so is there and we can still be ensured a solid grade I see no problem in the matter. Andrew Sullivan considers blogging to be a legitimate form of writing and expressing ideas. He argues, “writing in this new form is a collective enterprise as much as it is an individual one—and the connections between bloggers are as important as the content on the blogs. The links not only drive conversation, they drive readers” (Sullivan). I completely agree with Sullivan. Our weekly blog posts have not only fueled us to write and interact with a piece of text, but they have also allowed us to read what others have to say and gather information from their perspectives. Do you still consider us illiterate just because we’ve adapted to this new and conventional world of technology? Why I Blog also discusses the marriage between reading from the Internet and tangible text. Blogging “has exposed a hunger and need for traditional writing” (Sullivan). So if you still don’t believe me, feel free to meet up with Hedge’s at Starbucks and cry about the illiterate America over a copy of “Fahrenheit 451”.
The effects of technology have not caused society as a whole to struggle through a text, the effects have actually given us the ability to stylize, add tone, and bring our writing to life.  In the study that Lunsford and her colleagues conducted, they found that the students “were increasingly aware of those to whom they were writing and adjusted their writing styles to suit the occasion and the audience” (Lunsford). Such ability has risen thanks to our interaction with technology. We live in a world where we approach people and situations differently depending on their relationship to one another and the same rule applies to writing. In fact, “young people are for the most part aware of the context and audience for their writing- and they make the adjustments necessary to address them effectively” (Lunsford). Would you go up to your professor and hand them a beer in front of the entire class? Of course not, that would be an example of breaching formal with informal. We have the wherewithal to distinguish when it is appropriate to use a smiley face in a text and when we have to break out the semicolon.  Not only have we developed the ability to adapt to our writing audiences, but we have also developed a sense of tone in all writing pieces. Blogging “will inevitably be formed by the blogger’s personality. The blogosphere may, in fact, be the least veiled of any forum in which a writer dares to express himself” (Sullivan). I truly believe that we, as a society, have adapted to this technology and used it to our advantage. So you think we’re easily distracted? Maybe we are. However, to call a majority of American’s illiterate is offensive to people of all reading levels. As I’ve stated on my blog, As long as formal writing is taught in school and the education system reforms itself to provide sufficient means to ensure literacy I don't think we have a problem. We have the ability to switch our writing from formal to informal. As a whole, society is fully capable of grasping writing requirements for their audience. Google isn't making us stupid. Social media isn't ruining our writing. Text messaging won't make us fail our written final exam. We aren't calling our professors "bro" and inviting them to a sick party. We are a literate America simply transforming the way we write.

Tuesday, January 22, 2013

Am I at 250 Words Yet?

Honestly, the most challenging part of these posts have been remembering to do them the day before class rather than the day of class. I have to admit i'm a little bit of a procrastinator. I'm trying to work on that little character flaw though! Another complaint I would add is that i'm a firm believer in quality over quantity. There's only so much I can fluff and BS before I start sounding like the Twilight series (no offense). On the blog posts pertaining to the reading I totally understand and have no problem pushing out a bunch of words whatsoever but these reflection posts leave me a little stumped on words. I honestly really enjoy reading what other people in the class have to say. Sometimes they have a completely different perspective than I did on the text and I think that's sweet. Their input helps me form a better idea of what I have read and allow me to analyze it from multiple perspectives. I love blogging and reading so this is a type of homework that I thoroughly enjoy and look forward to doing in comparison to my online french problems. These blog posts have confirmed my enjoyment of blogging and use of social media as a way to deliver my writing even more. I think it is a perfectly acceptable way to get information out there. The class discussions have made me realize that I need to get in touch with what's going on in the world. I think that's the coolest part of class. I find myself opening a tab to a news website rather than facebook just so i can see if anything is up. Getting into groups and discussing the reading is a fun way to get information about the reading. Some areas aren't as easy to identify as it is to others. All in all I really dig the blog posts and I think they're a great way to get us engaged in the reading.

What is Literacy?

In "Literacy in Three Metaphors" literacy is described as being knowledge over a text. Literacy is more than just reading and memorizing certain words. It's also about being able to understand what it is you're reading on multiple levels. You must be able to respond to a text and analyze it. However, some people (especially minority and low income groups) are denied the ability to reach a 6th grade reading level because of their living, schooling, and social situations. Of course that is completely unfair and I honestly think poorer school systems need to be given more money and resources to ensure their students receive a proper education. Schribner states that "setting long-range social and educational goals...pushes us further toward an inquiry in our highly developed technological society". With reading levels so disproportionately distributes throughout society it's hard to come to a general accepted literacy level. When it comes to literacy...there is not an even playing field.
I completely agree with Lunsford. I think that transitioning from social media type informal writing to formal writing is practically imbedded within us. Just like we change drastically in front of our friends and our professors, we also change our styles of writing. His research found that "the length of student writing has increased nearly three fold in these 25 years". Lunsford also noted that the exchange's between writing on social media (such as facebook and emails) has also allowed people to develop a personal style and voice in their writing. So not only has our writing been able to develop a voice and stay formal but it also also lengthened. Pretty impressive, I think!
As long as formal writing is taught in school and the education system reforms itself to provide sufficient means to ensure literacy I don't think we have a problem. We can write formally and informally, switching between the two styles as we choose. As a whole, students are able to grasp the idea of formality pretty well and meet what is required. Google isn't making us stupid. Social media isn't ruining our writing. Text messaging won't make us fail our written final exam. We aren't calling our professors "bro" and inviting them to a sick party. We are able to distinguish the difference between formality and informality. If anything google and the internet has made us more adaptable.

Tuesday, January 15, 2013

So Can I Blame Google For Daydreaming in Class?

I'm hesitant to go as far as saying that the internet and search engines, like google, are making society as a whole "stupid". I mean yeah it has definitely contributed to shortened attention span and dependency on technology...but stupidity? I don't think so. Technology has made us lazy. I'm with Carr that I do not agree that "we'd all 'be better off' if our brains were supplemented, or even replaced, by an artificial intelligence" like Brin and Page suggested. Carr talks about the ignorance through Socrates opinion of people would "be thought very knowledgable when they are for the most part quite ignorant". Carr brings up the point that Socrates was not able to foresee how writing has spread ideas. I do not believe the internet is exactly fueling ignorance. Certain people will always spew whatever they hear or read before checking up on the facts. It has nothing to do with the internet, these types of people have always been around. Everyone is guilty of it at one point or another. I do not believe society as a whole depends on technology in an emotional way. It might be because i'm a camper, but i've gone a week with relying on technology and i could honestly go longer. I love getting away from everything, spending time with friends, and connecting with nature. It's activities like these that many people partake in that let me know we are not completely dependent. It's convenient and it's there...so why not use it?
Hedge's article seems a bit skewed to me. 20% of 42 illiterate americans hold high school diplomas? I don't think that's possible. I agree, however, with his remark that "The illiterate and semi-literate, once the campaigns are over, remain powerless.  They still cannot protect their children from dysfunctional public schools". My elementary school was north of 380 in Texas which was a pretty poor area. The school I attended was in a metal building and I kid you not we didn't have a math teacher my 6th grade year. My education was pretty messed up by my time there and thankfully I was able to switch schools. Some people don't have that opportunity. Many families there were illiterate  in the english language anyway, and were unable to get their children to a different schooling district.
Both Hedge and Carr paint Americans as sheepish people. It seems that neither have much faith in the individuality and thought process of US citizens. I think they have a pretty gloomy outlook. I want to look into Hedge's statistics more and possibly come back to this. 

Monday, January 14, 2013

Reading and Writing definition

Reading: The act of looking over and taking in a word or series of words. Reading is being able to comprehend a text and formulate it into an understandable idea. Harris believes that in order to read a text you have to be able to understand it and form your own opinions on the subject. You can look at the word "dog" and have no idea what it means but when you look at the word "dog" and understand what it is and what importance it has to the text that means you have read the word "dog".

Writing: The act of expression through words. Writing is used to bring an idea into the physical world. A thought, idea, or story is essentially nonexistent until it can be made obtainable to others, like in a method such as writing.

Sunday, January 13, 2013

Rewriting

Real talk, at the beginning of the introduction I thought Harris was trying to say "hey, as long as you intellectually rewrite another persons words, it's totally cool and not plagiarism". I understand what he is getting at now. He doesn't want us to hand in a summary, or recitation of what someone else has done. He wants us to personalize it, write it in terms that not only make ourselves understand what we are analyzing but also in a way that uses the authors words and ideas to formulate our own opinions. Our writing has to be our own and possess a certain type of personality, even when analyzing the work of others.
 I really like that he scorns the typical critiquer for caring more about spelling errors, grammar, and citations rather than the meaning, message, and thought process behind one's text. In chapter 1, Harris demonstrates how to "come to terms with a text by translating its words and ideas into your own language, making them part of your own prose". There is also a story behind a story. Harris wants us to push a way from the right and wrong and "push beyond sorts of bipolar oppositions". Instead notice how differing works "describe distinct uses of language, each with its own strengths and weaknesses". I believe Harris brings up many good points towards mastering analytical writing. 
It seems that Sullivan and Harris both acknowledge personalization and overreaching ideas are more important than the cookie cutter formulaic style of writing. Blogging and rewriting also allow you to see a personal side to the author. Sullivan notes that blogging is a type of free form writing that is spurred by spontaneity  which really allows the reader to connect with the person behind the words. Harris takes a more analytical approach, by telling his readers the thought process and annotating which can be done to find an author's voice. 
I still believe that blogging is a justified form of writing, just as dada is a justified form of art. Writing and the more hands-on forms of art are very similar. They're both about expression.

Tuesday, January 8, 2013

"Why I Blog" response


“Why I Blog” expresses the way blogging has (and continues to) changed the course of writing and journalism. Blogging presents a story in an imperfect and impromptu manner that reaches to an audience in a more personal way than formal writing usually has to offer. As Sullivan compares with the self-publicist, Karl Klaus, blogging offers the writer a stroke of fearlessness that allows them to send out a message instantaneously. The writer no longer has to worry about rejection from a third party to send out a message, which most authors encounter. However, with this freedom comes persecution from readers who possess the same fearlessness in the form of their critic. Sullivan discusses how he and his fellow bloggers coped with tragedies together through their writing and interacted with information on a more personal level rather than reading a news article. On a website, such as blogger, “these friends, moreover, are an integral part of the blog itself—sources of solace, company, provocation, hurt, and correction”.
                  In the article, Sullivan seems to think that blogging is a new and innovative way to share information amongst an audience. A blog post can easily snowball into a group discussion, argument, or insight to other sources. The spontaneity of a thought that can be projected in the blogosphere is the importance that blogging itself has to offer. I think that the personal level in which blogging presents itself helps the audience understand and relate to a piece of information rather than skim and retain bits and pieces. You get to the meat of the idea and are able to express an emotion of your own, whether it is positive or negative. A blog can be seen as a timeline for individuals. While going through their pages you’re able to see how their opinions have evolved over time and what their passions lie in. I agree with Sullivan that blogging has opened new doors for journalism and writing. I think that sites like these have presented a new platform for sharing information and allow individuals to openly transform their writings and ideas. I'm looking forward to seeing what everyone else has to say and hopefully i'll be able to pick up some of their insights as well! 

Making and Aesthetically Pleasing Blog.


The most difficult part of creating this blog was trying to decide which layout and color scheme to use. Whenever faced with a situation like this I always find myself asking "Okay, but does it come in pink...?". I'm satisfied with how it looks at the moment but it could change at any time if I find one that suits my personality better. I found the fact that the blog links to my google + very surprising and quickly deleted the link. Normally this would not be a problem but g+ never really hit it off in my friend group and I completely forgot about it. That being said, there are numerous embarrassing pictures from high school that I would rather not have to see every time I blog. Besides the link, I did not encounter any other problems but if I had i'd probably solve them by a simple google search or, if i'm feeling a little dangerous, a trial and error method until I stumble upon the answer. I do have my own blog that I post on regularly but it is not hosted by this site and very personal.
 I've always considered blogging a great way to express yourself and connect with others. The difference between blogging and facebook? Facebook is a social networking site that you check up on every once in awhile to see what people you don't know very well are up to and whether or not they're getting married. Blogging can be used to become familiar with the personalities and thoughts of multiple people. Normal writing, such as papers for class, and blogging are connected in such a way that information and viewpoints can be expressed to an audience. However, blogging is a much more personal level where the true voice of the writer can be heard without worry. Writing is formal whereas blogging gives off a relaxed and natural vibe. I’m looking forward to these class assignments. I think it will be a way to work through my thoughts and opinions in a way that I can form them easier into a formal writing piece.